Arch Rivals 2

BSF-240_CoverBethany and Vero have been after Archibald for a long time before finally settling their differences on the No Holds Bar stage in a heated sexfight. The victorious Bethany won her man—with a little help from her friend in the form of sexfighting lessons.

Since then, Bethany has been going out with Archibald, but the blonde knows she’s forever in competition with every woman who lays eyes on her favorite carrot head. And the competition is about to get real heated when her old rival shows up with a big surprise.

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3 throughts on "Arch Rivals 2"

  1. Great! I love Bethany and Vero…and this new chapter in their continuing saga has really raised the stakes! I like the ambiguity of the ending; even though Bethany once again dominated Vero, it’s unclear who actually won this conflict, and both women are definitely shaken.

    I really enjoyed this as a piece of writing. I like how you played to various themes without resorting to obvious cliches. Vero gets implants and has renewed confidence, but bigger doesn’t necessarily mean better, though their impact on Bethany isn’t lost either…shock and awe shake her confidence in her own, comparitively meager, endowments.

    I hope to one day see a third entry in this saga…will Bethany enhance her own bust to match Vero? Will Vero use her vast fortune to further enhance her bust so as not to be outdone? Who will win a third encounter? And lucky Archibald is caught in the middle; how can he possibly choose? Does he really care too, when he has two beautiful, busty, beauties fighting over him? How far are these two willing to take their competition? Of course, there could also be a surprise twist with these two realizing that they don’t need Arch at all, and that their real excitement comes not from his affections, but from competing with each other; Arch is only a prize to be traded between them…a justification for their conflict, and mostly irrelevant.

    Great work, as per usual! I have been consistantly blow away this year. You seem intent on constantly topping yourself with each new episode this year. I hope this trend continues.

  2. Vero needs to talk to the champ. I actually hoped that Vero would win this one. Bethany cusses too much like a sailor, Vero only when she is pissed. Vero seems more mature about the situation than Bethany does and Arch doesn’t see that. Which is a big loss for him. Hope he wakes up to that soon. Vero right now is the better girl in my opinion even though she has lost twice now.

    If there is a “coming out of leftfield” moment I would think Mack would be an interesting third piece. In which Arc goes crazy over her and by no fault of Mack’s own incurs the wrath of Bethany. Now that would be something.

    I love this particular story arch hope to see more soon. One can dream right?

  3. I’m loving this rivalry but miss the original ‘Betsy vs. Veronique’ versions. Any chance of a bonus story with them? What about the Hooker Squad?

    These stories are so classic because they take 2 famous rivals with legitimate reasons to hate each other and then let it play out without any restrictions. It got me thinking about other great girl/girl rivalries that really need this treatment. Mary Jane and the Black Cat immediately come to mind (with one or your main contributors being an expert in that area…)

    What others can you guys think of??

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