Cindy is at the gym with David, trying to add a little spice in their recovering marriage by teasing him with a sexy outfit as they work out. And what is the one thing a sexy girl in a sexy outfit DOESN’T want? That’s right: ANOTHER sexy girl with a SEXIER outfit stealing her man’s attention from her.
Two of my favorite bwl girls in a sex fight I couldn’t root for one over the other. I sure hope these eventually face off in an actual fight on the bwl website. As well as face each other in a sex competition again. As in oral,69,tribbing,and more kissing but still great first face off kudos.
This is another in your continuing trend of increasingly more provocative and engaging stories on this site! There’s something just so sexy about an obviously bigger woman having a titfight with an obviously less endowed woman to me. Something about that contrast. Perhaps it’s because everybody likes an underdog?
There were a number of great elements to this story; I really liked the gym encounter and how it grew into a fight, with each woman trying to outdo the other. I liked the internal monologue between them…I always like seeing the other chararcters perspective on each other, and particlularly Cindy.
I like Cindy…I find her to be charismatic and likable, but I also like that the other girls seem to have an almost innate dislike of her. The resentment that the enhanced girls have of her natural breasts, and the resentment that MacKenzie has of her size. I particularly liked MacKenzie’s observation that Cindy is somewhat snooty because not only is she on par with some of the other BWL girls in size, but she’s also natural.
Also, on a personal level, I really enjoyed the cameo from my favorite character, Megan, and the callback to her seemingly prophetic dream being echoed in reality…what could this mean for these two in the future? They’d make quite the contrasting pair…an Odder Couple I cannot imagine; big, busty, brawny, prudish Megan and lithe, small busted, fit, sexually aggressive MacKenzie. They’re almost exactly the inverse of each other not only physically but psychologically, but that may also make them complimentary in some strange way. I cannot wait to see how that develops! ^_^
Another exellent job!
This was a great story enjoyed where I went. I unlike Foreshadow am finding Cindy less like able the more I see her. My reason stems only to how disrespectful she is to David. Though David brings it on himself not really doing anything to command respect from Cindy. If David could read her mind he should bounce her like a bad check. But being a creature of habit he got comfortable with her and more than likely wont.
See this a problem that neither Paul or Ed has and that is why they have the ladies go after them. David needs to realize this and be a true playa in the game. That’s my rant on the Cindy and David dynamic.
Other than that I enjoyed watching Mack and hope she makes another run to become the BSF champion again. Great overall story!!
Mack was the reason I signed up for this site, so to see her in action and winning again brings a smile to my face. I enjoy her raw sexual energy and love it when she takes the bigger girls down a peg or two. I look forward to seeing where Cindy goes from this loss however, and how David responds to it as well.