When you’re a pro, sometimes you don’t get to pick who you work with. That’s a reality Denise has to cope with for this bikini photoshoot. She’s stuck with an annoying male model who’s full of himself and won’t stop hitting on her, and that bitch Desiree, the girlfriend of the guy from whom Tania bought the No Holds Bar.
This is just a bad day at the office, and it’s going downhill.
WOW!! Desiree is just bursting through the BSF girls and if Tania isn’t scared yet she should be. Can’t wait to see where this all goes next.
While I found myself, only “enjoying” this story (as opposed to being blown away like I usually am by the majority of the entries here and over in the BWL), I am finding myself incredibly intrigued by Desiree’s storyline.
Over the past several weeks, Desiree has been on an apparent path of destruction against Tania and the League. She has now defeated two of the original five (Louise in Doctor’s Orders 4 and Denise here), and has become the champion for Tania’s doctor investors; and hence the primary opposition for Tania and the No Holds Bar.
Desiree’s arc is making me think of classic Kung Fu movies where the protagonist fights through the lower ranks of the main antagonist’s forces before finally getting their hands on the mastermind and achieving revenge. Of course, the story works with Tania as the protagonist as well; where there is the unstoppable antagonist taking apart her life’s work in the hopes of not only defeating her, but utterly destroying her. No matter who you favor, both are in the right, and both are in the wrong.
I am curious to see if Desiree will first take on (and take out) the other two of the Founding Five (France and I can’t remember; either Jen or Regine I think) before finally forcing the climatic (pun intended) showdown on the No Holds Bar stage. I picture Desiree walking into La Physique Fantastique and ripping an orgasm out of France on the workout floor. This is followed by perhaps surprising Regine on the beach when she is back home at St. Tremble and making her cum in front of all the locals. She has largely been beating the founders in familiar environments; on the opponent’s home turf as it were (it would have been better had she beaten Louise in the outdoor ring, but hey, no storyline is ever perfect). It is fitting as Desiree appears not just interested in beating Tania, but exerting complete superiority over her. There’s no better way then taking Tania’s closest allies and defeating them where they are most comfortable. The way she was baiting Denise into the sexfight today shows she came to the photo shoot with a plan.
There is just one other thread that I wondering about. Is Desiree acting alone, or was this scheme developed in collaboration with a certain purple haired teen? Remember at the end of “Object of Desiree,” there seemed to be a developing alliance between Mack and Desiree about their mutual dislike and problems with Tania. I almost forgot it being obsessed with the idea of Megan and Mackenzie allying. I tend to think Mack is not involved as she seems more like she wants to beat Tania at her own game rather then dismantle her life’s work. But then again, anger, resentment, and revenge can make us do strange things.
Whatever the direction the story ultimately goes, I cannot wait to see it play out. As has been eloquently put by others on the boards, the writing for this year has been absolutely stellar and the over-arching stories are worthy of any first rate television show or novel.
Who among us wouldn’t love to see “BWL: The Series?”
Duh. Just scrolled down and saw: Sophie is the member of the Founding Five that I couldn’t recall. I guess her home turf would be anywhere in front of Dr. Leblond.
Can’t believe I forgot that. Sophie was one of the first characters I really fell in love with when I first started reading the BWL all those years ago.
Forgive me Pink Panther.
It is true that Desiree could go after the other members of the founding five but there is also the champion to concider think about it Kim completely dominates Tania in every sexfight they ever had also taking the championship from the Queen of sexfights would send a message to Tania
I could see Desiree going through the founders and then taking out Kim in an official BSF Title match to have the belt and hold all the cards against Tania.
Druid’s analysis is pretty much on the nose, and there are some interesting ideas proposed in this thread. I think it’s a testament to the great job you and Sherlock have been doing lately developing the characters and the story arcs that people are getting invested in the narrative. You’ve both been knocking it out of the park this year, and produced some of my favorite work that you’ve ever done!
I am really enjoying the Desiree story arc…as Druid said, and as I said before, I like the slow build. I like that you’re making Desiree a legitimate threat. As I said before, she’s like the shark in JAWS, circling closer and closer, cutting off Tania’s avenues of escape, slowly closing in. Her victories have proven that she’s not to be taken lightly, and it’s really making me question whether Tania can actually beat her this time. You’ve effectively raise the stakes, which is part and parcel of good storytelling, while at the same time deepening your exploration of the “Blown Away” genre in it’s many, varied, facets! I am enjoying this return to more story based updates on the BSF rather than the purely contest driven updates. I have no complaints about the content of the site, but I feel there’s just more depth, more immersion, more artistry to this more story driven approach. Great work!
SPOILERS AHEAD… but you really shouldn’t be reading comments if that stuff bothered you, right?
This was an OUTSTANDING update and worthy of the 250 landmark! It’s easily among my Top 5 encounters… and I can’t even recall the other 4 right now! Every page held my interest like a well-directed thriller, with so many themes interlaced along the way.
* Denise allowing herself to enjoy the attention usually reserved for her models, and then having that attention stolen away.
* Denise forced to compliment Desiree as the young diva hurls insults her way.
* Desiree grinding on the male model and forcing Denise to… to jizz down the side of her leg?! Incredible!
Desiree totally overwhelmed Denise without laying a finger on her, and that was the most amazing feat. The actual sexfight was over before it even began. I’d love to see a rematch between these two, but maybe in the BWL where Denise would have a chance.
Not sure if Desiree’s age has ever been mentioned, but between her and Mackenzie the future is bright. Can’t wait to see Desiree’s rematch with Tania.