In the Queen (or King) of the Hill tournament, Eduardo eliminated Mackenzie, but he was also quite smitten by her fit body and her feisty attitude. Then later he got to wrestle Megan, who was so fascinated by his boner that she lost all her will to fight.
Now the two women are in the same room, so how can the Argentine Adonis resist?
Interesting plot development here. The real kicker for me would have been if there was one more last page with Megan either softly pleasuring herself or some girl juice running down her thigh listing to Mack and ED. That would have plunged her deeper into the rabbit hole of this league.
Just me musing….
I was left with some very mixed reactions with regards to this chapter. On the one hand, it is overall a great story. I love the development of a possible love triangle between Mackenzie, Megan, and Ed. The joy of Mack and boost to her ego when Eduardo chose her over the gigantic boobed Megan. There was the passion between the two that was palpable. Lastly, the thrill of Mack at the thought of being Ed’s girlfriend and all the challenges the will come with it. It leads to potential conflicts with Mimi and several others (including Megan who needs her ego restored by beating on her dream girl).
On the negative side, I felt this story does not fit in the BWL universe considering BWL 421 (Showing Mack the Ropes). Ed and Mack did not merely have a fight; Ed absolutely destroyed Mackenzie with no remorse. He was completely disparaging to her; telling her she did not belong in the league. He used her like a punching bag. After the match, he was insulting to her as he tit-fucked her, calling her tits only “adequate” and belittling how small they were. It left Mack completely humiliated. Her last thought in that story was full of doubt about her staying in the league.
I cannot reconcile the harshness of Ed in the fight with his new infatuation with Mackenzie. He had no interest in her whatsoever. He specifically chose her as an easy win to qualify for a TDC and knew she was enamored with him. His treatment of her post-match, when he had gotten his victory, does not ring true for someone who finds her irresistible.
Also, while I know Mackenzie’s teenage ego is boosted by being the object of desire for someone of Ed’s stature and appeal, I can’t imagine her being able to forget what he did to her in the beach ring. He appeared to take pleasure in showing how inexperienced she is. He delighted in hurting her; hoping that his showing would be so impressive, Tania would forgo the two win requirement. His teabagging her while he titfucked her was humiliating, he insulted her body, her skill, and declared her unworthy of being a member of the BWL. Her just let that go for the sake of his monster cock rings just a tad hollow.
I know with the nature of the BWL opponents yesterday can easily become lovers today. But there are some pairings that just will not happen because personal conflict runs deep. I do not expect to ever see Mimi and Caribe in an intimate, non-competitive sexual encounter. Likewise with Jen and Cindy. After BWL 421, I felt Mack and Ed were in a similar boat; especially not so soon after the beach fight.
G_Money>I like to think that she made good on her promise to fuck the shit out of Korey as revenge for being spurned, but while she was doing it, it was thinking of Ed and MacKenzie. :B
Given my fairly obvious and well documented bias towards Megan (my favorite BWL girl), you’d think I’d be full of outrage to see her blown away by MacKenzie (another favorite BWL girl, but for different reasons), but I’m not…I actually would not have had it any other way!
What I always want for my favorite character…is whatever is BEST for her character. Winning or being lauded all the time is not always great for character…it lacks depth, and leaves no room for growth. This story revealed VOLUMES about Megan’s character in only a few images.
As ever, Megan is a complex character, and her time in the League has shown why she’s such a great character…because she’sa n EVOLVING character. Her time as champion and her recent mixed fights have caused Megan to rethink her narrow-minded view on her sexuality, and the attention paid to her by the various men of the BWL (particularly Eduardo who she seems to be very taken with) is something that she either hasn’t really experienced before, not has not noticed before.
I imagine that men have always paid attention to Megan, but that she was not cognizant of it, or just ignored it, until now. Now, suddenly, Megan is realizing that she is attractive. And her reign as champ has given her an ego-boost that she never had before. She was pretty humble when she first started, but now she has fans and she’s had a long run of successive victories, and now she has men, and women, being pretty open about their attraction to her. If you’re told that you’re special long enough, you’re bound to begin believing it.
Then she gets blown away by her STUDENT. This, coupled with her ego-deflating defeat by Regine in their impromptu tit-fight shows something about Megan that I’ve been craving since her introduction…Megan is becoming competitve, not just physically, but sexually. This is an aspect of her character that goes right back to her first encounter with France, and it’s an aspect that she has vehemently denied during her entire tenure in the BWL…Megan is very competitive against other women. Before it would take someone infringing on her ‘territory’ (IE her husband Korey) to get her ire up, but now we’re seeing her getting competitive in more casual situations. She dresses more provocatively when she knows the other BWL girls are going to be around. She is offended when her younger student steals the attention of a man she was set to reject…it’s not so much that Megan wanted to sleep with Ed, it’s that she just wanted his attention.
I like this direction and I’m hoping that it will lead to some more of Megan on the BSF, as her entries are always the most complex and creative, because they have to showcase more abstract forms of competition, or, if they are ‘fantasy’ episodes, they delve deeper into the psychology of the character.
Now, as for MacKenzie…some great stuff happening with her here as well! First off, I LOVE The idea of her and Megan as student and sensei! I’m hoping that this will translate over onto the BWL with MacKenzie gaining some much needed skill. Secondly, we don’t see too many non-competitive relationships between the girls, so I sort of like that they’d be friends, or at least friend-LY. and Third, we get some really nice character stuff with MacKenzie here.
A lot is revealed about MacKenzie’s character here. We get to see the anxieties of the usually confident Mack. Being the smallest girl in a group of super-women is really having an impact on Mack’s ego (it shouldn’t…she represents a different body-type not shown in the League and it makes her unique), so I love the line about her considering implants (though I’d be curious to see what a bustier MacKenzie looks like, I don’t think I’d actually want her to change). We also get to see her flattery at being chosen over Megan. This reveals two things:
Firstly, it reveals the respect and inherent attraction that MacKenzie has for Megan. In her mind there is no way anyone would chose her over Megan.
Secondly, it shows that competitive side of women where they are always comparing themselves to others. MacKenzie doesn’t just compare herself to Megan, but to Mimi and every other woman that Eduardo has fucked as well.
MacKenzie’s infatuation with Ed is also a great character reveal in that she heavily romantizes Eduardo. He looks like he walked off of a romance novel cover. He’s masculine and manly in that old-school way, and he’s also older than her. MacKenzie immediately falls for her machismo…without looking any deeper.
Ed’s own thoughts reveal why he’s enamoured with MacKenzie…it’s because he likes submissive women. Ed’s an old-world misogynist; it’s not a conscious thing, and he doesn’t mean anything by it…it’s just how he was raised. I have a feeling that Ed like’s MacKenzie because she is weak. Which should bring up an interesting twist later on when her training starts to pay off, and she’s suddenly NOT weak.
There’s a LOT of potential for story here…this combined with this weeks BWL episode have both proven why these are such great sties; the firm grounding in character and story. I am INVESTED. I can’t wait to see what happens next, and how the characters evolve! Great work, both of you!
What about Rita?
Or was that just a holiday fling?
Rita lives in Saint-Tremblé, so yes, she was a holiday fling–although I bet that if Ed goes back there, she’ll be all over him 😉