Promises Too

BSF-291_CoverWhen Theo wanted to stop Mackenzie’s boxing match against Kandice, Mack begged him not to and promised she’d have sex with him if he let her continue. When the ref pointed out that Meg did the exact same thing a few weeks ago, Mack, who trains with the busty fighter, said she’d sexfight the mega-mammed blonde for his cock.

Theo agreed and Mack won. Now, the college student is qualified for a Title shot, but she must repay her debt promptly.

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3 throughts on "Promises Too"

  1. I know it’s a little predictable to say that I loved this, but I really did! There was some really sharp writing here.

    Every story starts by establshing ‘normal’ and then having ‘normal’ change. In this case, Megan’s ‘normal’ has happened between stories, and the opening preamble with her journey from the elevator to the room deftly fills in the off-page story; ‘normal’ changed when she sleep with Theo, and she has since grown accustomed to her new ‘normal’…her continued dalliances with Theo behind her husband Korey’s back, and she has obviously grown comfortable with this arrangement, despite the fact that she still harbors guilt…but the guilt is part of what makes it exciting to her. Megan has been a ‘good girl’ all her life, and all it’s amounted to is a filandering husband and a lot of frustration. Now she’s getting a measure of payback as well as, what is for her, a measure of sexual charged adventure and thrill. This is her ‘normal.’

    Now, ‘normal’ changes when a new element is introduced; MacKenzie. The changing of ‘normal’ results in conflict, and story is conflict. Megan has grown accustomed to having Theo’s undivided attention, something that she has to fight for with her husband’s wandering eye, and now that attention is threatened by her…friend isn’t really the right word, so let’s say partner as their relationship has been mostly benevolent until now…MacKenzie. Megan is now confronted the the idea that she’ll have to compete for attention in an arena that she has little experience in…the sexual arena.

    I really loved the writing in this; Megan’s voice and motivation is really clear. As always she’s conflicted, trying to rationalize her investment in Theo and her desire to beat MacKenzie, and, as always with a Megan story, we see her arc progress. Megan is highly competetive, but has never considered sex as a competition. It excites her, and I love that she loses here, because it also motivates her. Megan is a sore loser, and if she had beaten Mack, she probably would have gotten way less out of this encounter than she did, because now that she’s tasted the humilation of defeat, she’s motivated to win. Also, on a personal note, I find one sided competitions really erotic…I love that Megan gives her all but is utterly powerless against MacKenzie. Totally arousing!

    So now we have a new ‘normal’ established…a ‘normal’ that sees Megan entering into the world of the BSF more fully. I doubt she’ll actively seek out sexual competetion, but it’s now an arena that she can confortably enter as a character without seeming out of place.

    On a slightly more selfish note, I hope to GOD this means we’ll see a Megan/France titfight in the future! I want one sooooo bad. ^_^;;;

  2. It was wonderful to see Mack and Megan locked together again. As one who suggested the two of them coming together, it was amazing to see them in actual competition (versus their first encounter which was more just sex given Megan came at each touch). Foreshadow is right in their relationship is a unique one. Not quite friends, but definitely close and some small degree of trust, although that is now being tested with Mack beating Megan for Theo.

    What I also find interesting is we are seeing a very devious side from Mack come to the forefront. We know she was helping Desiree train to defeat Tania, which was natural given the hatred between the teen and the MILF. However, Mack looking to gain an unfair advantage in competition by having Theo in her…pocket? This is breaking ground for a BWL member. There have been occasions where a girlfriend has tried to drain her man before a fight (not a sexfight) to make sure he is not distracted by his female opponents sexual wiles. We have not however, had someone who looked to rig a fight in her favor. Not even some of the most wicked characters have tried this, as there is a begrudging level of respect for the rules, be what they may.

    I am curious where this goes. Is Mack doing it because she feels she needs the title to validate her place in the league given her poor record and the constant barrage of “give up and make way for Prudie?” Or is she doing this because she believes anything goes to get what she wants.

  3. I want to see a Megan and France lesbian sexfight it would be great.To see France’s inner thoughts on Megan inner lesbian coming out.

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