3 throughts on "A Few Nips at the Bar"

  1. Artistically, this is yet another excellent story, particularly image 3, which has a great illustrative quality too it. The warm lighting, with the hot white highlights melting into the warm pastels and then the dark core shadow and the cool bounce light coming from behind is just beautiful!

    From a story standpoint, I am LOVING this string of subtle bar sexfights you’ve been doing…they’re just so erotic and engaging, even without showing any nudity. There’s something about having a more subtle sexfight in front of people that really heightens the eroticism.

    I also love when you used the BSF to build up anticipation of BWL matches; this is the most effective way of crossing over the league, and it gives the matches more emotional and narrative weight by establishing the motivation and the stakes. I am REALLY excited about Tania and MacKenzie’s confrontation now, because it’s not just about a title anymore (all titles are meaningless…they only have the worth we ascribe to them, and fighting only for glory isn’t the strongest story motivator unless there are emotional stakes tied to that glory…that’s why all sports movies are about underdogs and outsiders. Glory = Acceptance by the community, while glory for the antagonist is meaningless because they are already accepted), it’s about Tania’s hidden desire for MacKenzie, and MacKenzie’s desire for respect. It gives great depth to the upcoming fight and establishing emotional stakes, creating conflict both internal and external.

    Like I’ve said before…you’re really killing it on the BSF lately. I think your best stuff is on this site, and possibly some of your best stuff ever recently. The writing and art are razor sharp, and you still manage to find novelty every week. Great stuff!

  2. Like Foreshadow, I found this incredible. Mack has been my favorite ever since she debuted. I do not know if it is her purple hair or her teen attitude, but I absolutely love her. This clothed sexfight in the bar was great and the differing motivations between Tania and Mack was great. One looking to seduce, the other looking to defy.

    This thread with Tania has been very enjoyable. Ever since the Nature vs. Nurture tournament where her hatred for Mack melted into lust has intrigued me. Personally, I would love to see Mack figure out what the situation is and turn it back on Tania (spurred on by the confidence having retained the BWL title against Tania as we saw in this week’s BWL update). She ends us seducing the MILF, setting the relationship on her terms. I imagine her wearing decidedly youthful clothing, hair in braids or pigtails, playing up the “little girl” aspect, and always calling Tania “Mommy” whenever they are intimate. This way, no matter what Tania may do to Mack, she has laid down the rules and in a way is in control of the situation, capitalizing on Tania’s attraction for younger women.

    I love this idea as the ripples it would cause. Would Megan become jealous that Mack is pursuing a relationship with another woman? We all know her jealousy over having to share a man (Theo) with Mack and her envy that Mack is fucking Eduardo. But would the knowledge that her “sparring partner” was sleeping with another woman lead to more inner turmoil and break down further walls in Ms. Maloney’s crumbling fortress of conservative morality?

    And what about Prudence? How the hell would she feel not only learning her mom’s fucking her main rival, but that they are engaging in some sort of mother/daughter role play? Does she become jealous that her mother doesn’t think she is good enough to bed? Or does it make her want to try to steal this relationship too, like she does with Tania’s boyfriends?

    The BWL/BSF really is the best soap opera out there. To again parrot ForeShadow, the writing is amazing as the doors and possibilities you open with these characters is amazing. For a cast that has been around for 12 years to still have fresh, engaging plot lines is a testament to your creativity.

    Can’t wait to see where things go from here.

  3. Druid that would make a great story arc however the way its stands now I don’t think that’s going to happened I mean Mackenzie hates Tania for what she’s done to her when she first joined the BWL and Tania wont get into a relationship with her as the “weak one” still I like the idea.

    Also are Mackenzie and Prudence still considered as rivals I mean its been years since they last fought on the BWL or the BSF and they don’t make reference to each other at all heck Prudence hasn’t even done a thing to get payback on Mackenzie for taking her mothers spot.

    Actually its kinda funny if you think about it Mackenzie’s on top of the world right now as the Interim Champion while Prudence is just floating around almost makes me wonder what would happen if the roles were reversed? Would Prudence be the champion? Would Mackenzie just be hanging around or would she be plotting her revenge? Now there’s something to think about.

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