Since her break-up with her husband Korey, Megan has had difficulties managing her raging libido. Before she faced Mackenzie’s boyfriend Eduardo in a boxing match, she told him she’d fuck him if she won, but left the ring defeated and frustrated.
Now, she gets an unexpected text message and she rushes to the hotel.
This definitely one of the top BSF stories, and definitely one of the most intense Megan stories! It was all around a novel and exciting story for everyone though…I really loved what this did for MacKenzie’s character, and even though Ed didn’t participate much, I feel like this advanced and clarified his character as well and has given him something to do.
As a piece of visual storytelling, this is a great example of how ambitious Entropy can get; Megan’s introduction is beautiful, building anticipation and revealing character. Her monologue reveals how far she’s come since her introduction as the prudish, moralizing, tease and introduces us to the new Megan; one who is going through a transition. Having shed her old life by divorcing her husband, Megan is now indulging herself…she is now longer the devoted married woman who fights to arouse her husband; everything she does now is for HER and HER pleasure. This is a new experience for Megan, one that she’s not used to; for so long she was the one who was being cheated on, but now she’s experiencing the thrill of being the ‘other woman.’ As has been previously established, Megan has slowly been coming around to the thrill of sneaking around, which she experienced during her tryst with Theo, as well as the intoxication of being desired. Her monologue shows that Megan is excited just by the act of sneaking around behind MacKenzie and being desired by Ed, which is a theme that runs throughout the episode; the idea that Ed wants her, whether projected or real, is enough to excite and motivate Megan to leave her comfort zone and plunge headfirst into the unexplored world of sexfighting…a world for which she is woefully unprepared!
Upon arrival we can see how much Megan’s worldview has evolved when she quickly doffs her clothes outside in the hallway, musing on the excitment of potentially being caught; such exposure would have previously been her greatest fear, now it’s an aphrodisiac. We’re also seeing how bold Megan has become as compared to her old self, as she confronts Eduardo aggressively and with confidence; previously she would have been hesitant and awkward, as she was when Theo, unused to both the act of seduction, having not had to seduce her husband since they first met (my own theory is that Megan never seduced Korey, but was seduced…I feel like she was always sexually submissive until joining the BWL), and to being the object of desire (Megan’s prudishness very much gives her the bearing of someone unaware of how hot they are…in my writings of Megan, I proposed that she was probably overweight in her youth and changed drastically over time). Since joining the BWL Megan has become aware of herself as being desirable to both men and women, and Ed in particular after her last fight with him, in which he was demonstratably aroused. Megan’s ego has inflated considerably as a result and this has led to her being more confident and bold.
Part of what makes this a great piece of writing, though, is that Megan’s new confidence borders on narcissism; she is over confident in her desirablity because she is niave. This is all new territory to her, and she takes everything at face value…which is part of what makes the twist so profoundly exciting when Mack reveals herself as the mastermind behind Eduardo’s invitation!
Megan has no concept of the games the BWL girls play in the BSF…she’s woefully inexperienced at seduction and even moreso at the more abstract, psychological, competition that is the domain of the BSF. She gets an invitation from a guy she wants to fuck, she takes it at face value that she is desirable and wants to fuck her behind his girlfriends back…never considering that her rival would set a trap for her with the intent of using her to prover her womanhood to her lover.
Part of what makes this such an exciting story is the relationship between MacKenzie and Megan…the history they share. MacKenzie is entirely justified in setting her honeytrap because, as she states, they were supposed to be friends and Megan betrayed her by coming there. But not even just friends…both of them served as mentor to the other; Megan as MacKenzie’s trainer, helping to improve her wrestling and boxing skills (to great effect, given her recent success), and MacKenzie inducted Megan into the world of sexual competiton and female sex. Of course, this gives MacKenzie a huge advantage over the over-ambitious Megan, as the irony is that the younger woman is far more sexually experienced than Megan who has spent the majority of her sex life with one man, and her only lesbian encounter was with MacKenzie.
What follows is one of the most intense bouts of sexual humiliation we’ve seen in the BSF…this was truly astonishing stuff! Megan awkwardly challenging MacKenzie, hoping to prove herself to Ed, only to have her challenge dimissed by MacKenzie and is instead PUNISHED in a humiliating one-sided drubbing as MacKenzie gets Eduardo to physically restrain Megan and impale her ass with his massive cock…the fact that it’s her FIRST anal experience making it even more humiliating!
Everything that follows is amazing, as Megan is helpless to defend herself; not just because she is restrained by Eduardo, but because MacKenzie knows her too well and overwhelms her completely with pleasure! The focus on Megan’s breasts is particularly telling, though, given that they are (A) Megan’s proudest asset, and the thing that she led with in her attempt at seducing Ed and (B) the thing that MacKenzie most envies in any of the BWL girls, and the thing she has the most anxiety about as it relates to Ed. There is an unstated subtext here if we consider Mack’s recent history with Megan’s other greatest rival, France, who has previously dominated and humiliated MacKenzie…not just as she famously did in the NATURE VS NURTURE tournament, but afterwords when she forced herself into a threesome with Ed and MacKenzie and completely dominated. Given their uncanny similarity, I think it’s safe to assume that MacKenzie is projecting that animosity onto Megan…who is basically France on Easy Mode. France made MacKenzie feel powerless, so MacKenzie takes out that frustration with Megan serving as a helpless, less experienced and confident, proxy for France.
I have to say that I love the decision to portray Megan as being completely inept as a sexfighter…it gives her a place to go in terms of an arc, and it very much keeps to the theme that was establish in that first appearance; Megan is a skilled and dominant physical opponent, but sexually inexperienced. It’s always been her greatest weakness, and as far as she’s come, it’s one she still hasn’t completely addressed. Which is not to say that she doesn’t have potential; as she proves here, even as she’s being dominated by MacKenzie, Megan is still able to look at the bigger picture; resisting or even beating Mack is not the real objective here…impressing Eduardo is. The flaw that Megan identifies in Mack’s plan is that she doesn’t expect Megan to use the fact that she’s being dominated to take advantage of Eduardo’s arousal. While Mack is concentrating on dominating Megan, she is concentrating on getting Ed off. This results in something of a draw between them; objectively MacKenzie destroyed Megan…but now Ed is interested in Megan, which has TONS of potential for story!
The imagry that accompanied the complex and nuanced narrative was as ambitious as the story being told; the use of light and shadow for creating mood, the acting in the characters, the expressions, and not to mention the just pure eroticism…I love the image of Megan laying her breasts on Mack’s, trying to appear intimidating, confident, and in control, even as her thoughts reveal her panic and confusion. And images 12-14 beautifully demonstrates Entropy’s attention to detail; the compression of Megan’s breasts against the bed, and the way they spread out is incredibly erotic! Image 16 of Mack suckling Megan’s nipple looks amazing; the pucker of the lips on the nipple is incredible!
Overall, this was an incredibly ambitious story both narratively and visually, and easily one of the best Entropy has done to date! I may be biased, but I feel like Megan brings out the best in Entropy as a creator, as her stories are always so emotionally intense and sexually gratifying. Fantastic work!
Did I miss something when did Megan divorce Korey did it happen in a past story?
BlueDragon>Yep; in the BSF story with her and Cindy (Virtual Call), Megan mentions in a line of dialogue that her and Lowry have divorced. The exact circumstances behind it are unknown, but my guess is that Megan realized that she was too good for him, particularly since being exposed to the selection of studs in the BWL, and that she used his cheating to prove irreconcilable differences.
Now free of her marriage Megan seems to be expanding and experimenting, which makes for some compelling and novel narratives!
I echo what BlueDragon32 wrote, when did that happen?
As for this; I guess it’s a pretty safe bet that Mack & Megans pseudo friendship/mentor student thing is dead now. While I expected it at some point it don’t make it any less of a pity; I dug that weird relationship, it was actually one of the more honest ones in BWL/BSF.
I would echo Rpierz comments here, I think it is a shame Megan & Mack’s special relationship has disintegrated so soon – and that of Megan & Corey tbh … Megan’s willingness to learn, to address her weaknesses in a competitive manner and her ongoing faithfulness to Corey once made her quite unique now largely she just seems to have become pretty indistinguishable from the majority of the league.
This Megan/Mack/Ed story seems rather recycled to me. It’s like when Jen was obsessed with stealing David from Cindy. To me I think evolving story of Tania trying to steal. Mack from Ed is more interesting and has more history to it.
BlueDragon>Nothing says that subplot has been resolved, and it is definitely fully of novelty. I personally like this direction for Megan because it challenges here and upsets the status quo; change is good for a character, and characters grow from conflict.
Every plot driven story starts with a character saying, “I want” and making effort towards achieving their desire, overcoming obstacles that stand between them and their desire. Every character driven story starts with a character saying, “I am” and having that belief challenged, and either adapting or staying resolute. In this case, Megan’s story started when she first met France and said, “I am of high morals; I believe that sex should be between monogomous couples.” That belief has been challenged time and again; initially she tried to stay resolute, but now we’re seeing her adapt.
Marrying a plot driven narrative to a character driven narrative drives the character forward as they pursue a goal; Megan says, “I want Eduardo” and makes effort to get him, but is challenged by MacKenzie. MacKenzie is a great obstacle because she has more experience than Megan…so this forces Megan to adapt as part of her making effort towards achieving her desire.
Not to say that this doesn’t advance MacKenzie’s narrative as well, because she has her own worldview challenged; she believes that she’s enough for Ed, but is worried about her small breasts in a world of large breasted women. This is the obstacle she faces; how does she fend off the predators of the BWL when she feels inadequately equiped to do so?
Of the BWL characters, Megan and MacKenzie, being the newest, have had the most obvious arcs, and their development over time is exciting an compelling to me from a storytelling perspective. Some great work!