When Sophie challenged Jenn for the Belt last November, Melanie joined Sophie’s lover Michel Leblond in the studio for commentaries and a bit of action of their own. As Jenn defeated Sophie and won Michel, Melanie promised to challenge the Champ. Tonight’s the night, in a new No Holds Bar oil ring, with a super aphrodisiac oil they now call “Oil of Olé”.
I still stand firm on the issue that Megan never received any sort of discipline for bribing former referee Theo and after reading through this match, I had an idea…
As punishment for her actions, Megan must compete for the BSF Championship title, if she refuses then she will be kicked out of the league.
Now I know what everyone is thinking “Isn’t that more of a reward than a punishment?”, and for any other BWL girl or guy that would be true, but for Megan this scenario would be a living nightmare, and the best part is no matter which way it plays out she’ll still lose, for you see if she loses she’ll be sexually humiliated again just like she was in the Couples Tournament but if she wins she’ll have to continue defending the title at least one more time.
So I’m making a petition to make this sexfight happen Megan vs. the BSF Champion, anyone who agrees with me let your voices be heard.
Random_Guy: I like it! Well thought out and novel premise that speaks to character and suggests more story. You have my vote! I’d especially like to see her face Melanie…I think it’s a good match-up, and there is already conflict there; plus Melanie can take the psychological advantage by calling back to the time she gave Paul the fuck of his life!
This was another great match, and some great character development for Melanie, who is fast becoming a favorite of mine.
I love Melanie’s character design; her thickness is a novelty in the BWL/BSF because she has a very different body type (one I find sexy), but I also like how Entropy/Sherlock mine it for story; having Melanie find confidence as she struggles, and overcoming body dysmorphia is a great conflict! It paints her as the underdog in a world of model thin physically fit perfection. When the BWL girls throw shade on her for being “fat” (by their standards), it makes the reader want to root for her, and makes her triumphs have deeper emotional weight (:P), and her loses greater impact.
Great work! Hail to the new Queen!
Loved the match, Jen had a great little run. Melanie is a great addition to the roster, I like how she has been …. fleshed out a bit more too look less like the other titans and more unique.
Loved it
Great job
I must say that I simply love how humiliating it must be for Jenn to be challenged so thoroughly by someone who everyone in the league disparages for her figure, though it looks like to me. My favorite part must be when Jenn is demanding that Mel fight fair only to receive the snide allegory of ‘if this was a boxing match would I have to let you hit me to prove I could take a punch?’.
I do have one question, though, and that is if we’re going to be seeing Hani again soon? I would think that the sexy eastern European would want a shot at Jenn even if the title was no longer on the line if only for a chance at vengeance. Hani is just so mean and hot I can only see her wanting to challenge Jenn not only to heal her pride but also to kick the Platinum Princess while she’s down.
All and all great work and I can’t wait to see the newest edition of this great series.
Capo