ED and JOANNE
Eduardo is very much in demand among the BSF girls, but that doesn’t stop him from expanding his horizon once in a while. So tonight, he’s brought this hot little chick to his favorite bar and is about to finalize the transaction when someone interferes. Someone we know from her previous encounter with Sophie and Professor Leblond, someone who was beaten by the Pink Panther in a heated sexfight and now has developed a taste for this type of challenge.
Thanks for bringing back Joanne! I have a question: in the comments for the last story, Foreshadow said that Joanne had already returned in a previous story in a fight with an unknown blonde. Could you tell me whcih story that is, in case I can’t find it?
Thanks
JB57
Don’t worry, just found it. Thanks.
JB57
Whoops! Nope, I mistook Tania for Joanne. I actually think that Joanne has not reappeared before now. Anyway, great story. Looking forward to seeing more of her – maybe a rematch with Sophie?
JB57
I don’t think I used Joanne since that Amazonology story, a while back. I may have used another character that looked a bit like her–although I can’t see which one.
I like the fact that Joanne–although very athletic–is a little “thicker” than most characters on the site. Plus it’s fun to see her discover her competitive side in the margin of regular BSF postings…
I’ll use her again a few times that’s for sure!
JB57>Sorry, I thought you were referring to Ashley. My bad. ^_^;;;
Entropy>I liked this story a lot, partly for the reasons you enjoyed producing it, and partly because I like seeing the contrast between the more experienced men and woman in the BWL and outsiders… Joanne, having just discovered her predilection for competitive sex, assumed that she had the upper hand, only to stumble onto Ed, who is quite skilled and experienced… a sexfight is no big deal to him, but still blows her mind. I hope she crosses paths with Mimi at some point. ^_-
I also like the idea of you experimenting with different body types, as you have been lately, starting with muscular Mimi back in the day, to thin, fit, MacKenzie. It’s good to have a variety of body types, and thus far we haven’t seen a more voluptuous woman in the BWL, so Joanne fills a nice niche. I always enjoy when you introduce incidental characters and experiment with new looks/body types. I also like that the BSF is starting to build up it’s own roster of recurring characters separate from the BWL. It’s a nice departure and allows you and Sherlock to explore the world outside the core BWL (I really enjoy the Sainte-Tremble stories).