It’s a busy night at the Montreal XXXpo. Caribe is horny so she asks doorman Paul to fuck her, but while he waits for her, somebody else shows up in the private room. Somebody with a bone to pick with the sexy stripper.
*Quote by Hitchcock. “Revenge is sweet and not fattening.”
I love the character of Melanie, in every respect. She’s gorgeously voluptuous, and I love that you’ve highlighted her weight and bodytype relative to the BWL girls as a story and character point. I am really happy to see her getting more use and exposure, and this was a great example of why!
I loved the use of the “Blown Away” theme here to illustrate the psychological impact of being blown away. You’ve really taken this theme to a higher place and elevated it too it’s own genre. I love the idea of competition on a deeper, more subtle, level like this…Caribe doesn’t even know who she is competing with, but she does recognize that she lost, and it affects her deeply. This was a great piece of writing!
Great work… both of you!
Oh, I forgot to mention that I love that last image of Caribe crying…it reminds me of a Roy Lichtenstein painting. ^_^
I was worried by the restyled Caribe in her last BWL match but you have got her looking superhot once again, many thanks. Paul must be considered a complete and utter loser after this performance, he should have been the one in tears!
On her last fight, I tried experimenting with the idea that before a fight, a fighter is “pumped”, the result of last minute intense training and of the physical strain during the fight. I was not convinced by the result, though.